Kana-The-Drifter on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/kana-the-drifter/art/The-Nightmares-542058958Kana-The-Drifter

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think you did a pretty good job, however, I personally think there are things to improve on. First off, they all have a front-facing profile which, while including a lot of detail has a slight lack of impact. Secondly, there are proportions that need to be paid attention to. The arms and head are too big for the legs and chest and the positioning creates slight awkwardness, for example, the positioning of Bonnie's leg. Beside that, this is an amazing piece. I love how you shaded and colored in the piece. I hope you think this critique is fair and take in some of what I touched on. Good Job!